Zi was immediately interrupted by Angelica asking, “Where are you going with this? Is this about my weight?”
Zi replies, “Weight? You’ve weight?” And he smiles.
We understand that perception is reality and our job as writers is to take that word clay and prepare it for the kiln so when fired it creates images. Some are thought provoking, others ugly, some funny. But there are those days when we utterly fail to understand. Thus, bringing to our humble attention one very simple fact, we like many of our manuscripts are works in progress.
Below is an excerpt from KILLER DOLLS, a soon to be Champagne Books release, we hope you enjoy it.
EXCERPT TWO
They got a room, asked to use the phone, storm had the lines down, asked about a cell phone and the clerk, a man of advanced age, looked at Taut as if he were an alien, paid in cash, parked out of view, and entered a nice but tacky cabin room.
“I see that shabby-chic is nouveau. The guest towels say… well used. Look, a bottle of shampoo. I used this stuff when I was a kid. It bubbles." Letti was rambling and gently ranting to cover her fear. She now understood the gravity of the situation; it was real, though she did not know why two very evil men were chasing them. Nor why they had her dolls. Why? The dual whys came out in unattractive rumbling, its blasphemy a cruel sacrilege.
“I am sleeping where?” asked Taut. The room had one bed.
“Between me and the door… and that window.”
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Angelica Hart and Zi
KILLER DOLLS ~ September 2009
SNAKE DANCE ~ February 2010
CHASING GRAVITAS ~ July 2010
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KILLER DOLLS can be purchased at
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http://www.champagnebooks.com/
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