Body language can add another dimension to
your dialogue scene, because it reveals a person's intentions, feelings or
mood.
The five main types of body language are
gesture, posture, movement, facial expression and tone of voice.
Gesture Examples
She pointed to the orchard. “I saw him
there.”
He slammed his fist on the table. “I've had
enough.”
She scratched her chin. “Are you sure this
will work?”
“Welcome.” He
pointed to the couch. “Why don't you make yourself comfortable?”
Posture Examples
She raised her chin. “You can't make me do
this.”
He locked his arms across his chest. “No
way.”
She leant away from him. “This isn't
working between us.”
“I consider
this an insult.” He stood with his shoulders squared and his legs braced. “Take
it back.”
Movement Examples
“Maybe another
time.” He turned to leave.
She walked faster. “I told you I don't want
a date.”
“All right.” He
shuffled forward.
“Follow me!”
She leaped across the brook.
Facial Expression Examples
Her eyes narrowed. “You expect me to
believe this?”
His cheeks turned tomato-red. “What do you
mean?”
“I'm sorry.”
She stared at the floor. “I didn't want it to be this way.”
The corners of his eyes crinkled, and his
lips twitched. “Really?”
Tone of Voice Examples
“We will stand
together in this.” His voice was deep and resonant like a church bell.
“I've told you
a hundred times, and I'm telling you again.” Her voice sounded like a dentist's
drill, high-pitched and persistent. “Why don't you ever listen?”
“You know that
I'm going to kill you, don't you?” He sounded as casual as if he were
discussing the weather. “Do you prefer a shot in the heart, or the head?”
“You've been
with that floozy again, you cheating bastard!” Her voice was loud enough to
wake up the whole neighborhood.
Body Language instead of Dialogue Tags
Using body language allows you to cut boring dialogue tags (he
said, she asked, he answered) because it shows who's talking.
Tag versions:
“What about the
girl?” he asked.
“Bastards!” she
shouted. “I won't let you get away with this.”
“What now?” he
wondered aloud.
Body language versions:
He jerked his chin at her. “What about the
girl?”
“Bastards!” She
slammed her fist on the table. “I won't let you get away with this.”
He scratched his head. “What now?”
Point of View
Most people aren't aware of their body
language. Therefore, use body language for the character who is not the PoV.
If the body language is intentional, for
example gestures, you can use it for PoV and non-PoV characters.
Lies and Secrets
Advanced writers can use body language to
hint at secrets and lies. The characters' words say one thing, but their body
language another.
“Yes, tell me
the rest of your life story, it's so exciting.” She glanced at her watch. “It's
a pleasure to hear all about it.”
He hugged his arms around his chest. “I'm
not frightened.”
His face paled. “That's all right, honey.
It doesn't matter at all.”
If a character avoids eye-contact, this
suggests that they're not telling the truth or are hiding a secret.
“Don't wait
with dinner for me tonight, darling. Arabella and I will have to work late
again.” He did not meet Sue's eyes. “It's a bore, but the workload is getting
heavier every day.”
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