tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5417933958332866867.post6494912723225067274..comments2024-02-13T05:45:21.290-05:00Comments on Champagne Book Group Blog: The Scene - What’s it all about, Alfie?Kat Hallhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17403674744943719495noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5417933958332866867.post-72412469574622758832013-07-11T22:40:27.398-04:002013-07-11T22:40:27.398-04:00Hi, Lavada. That's the creative part of writin...Hi, Lavada. That's the creative part of writing...keeping the reader turning the page, eh?Laurie Templehttp://www.laurieryanauthor.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5417933958332866867.post-39617642043747257972013-07-11T13:06:53.886-04:002013-07-11T13:06:53.886-04:00A great reminder to take a good look at those scen...A great reminder to take a good look at those scenes. I especially liked the 'arrive late' and 'leave early'. Lavadahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05975080834956042479noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5417933958332866867.post-55436512981972432822013-07-10T11:17:00.034-04:002013-07-10T11:17:00.034-04:00Hi, January. Thanks for stopping by. Hi, January. Thanks for stopping by. Laurie Templehttp://www.laurieryanauthor.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5417933958332866867.post-50782520189778958682013-07-10T11:07:25.610-04:002013-07-10T11:07:25.610-04:00Excellent Points! Best, JanuaryExcellent Points! Best, JanuaryJanuary Bainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13119921877074838876noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5417933958332866867.post-66832857007670021122013-07-10T08:04:28.613-04:002013-07-10T08:04:28.613-04:00Laurie, you hit home with this one. I have been le...Laurie, you hit home with this one. I have been learning to cut out chunks of what I'd normally write and I find it's actually more compelling. As a reader of detailed, epic fantasy, I'm actually thankful when an author demonstrates this skill, taking me from a dock to the inside of a castle in one sentence. Browng34https://www.blogger.com/profile/13687131439250620317noreply@blogger.com